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Topic: AUTUMNS GOTHIC GLOOM, Dark Gothic Necro Poetry
Twilightmystic
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Posted: Nov. 10 2011,6:33 am

I  walk the city of the dead
sweet scents of dying jasmine
and upturned earth fragrants
the air lifting any of my dispairs
     Dark gloomy skies above I
here the cry of the mournin dove
ever a mournful cry brings tears
of joy to my eyes as well as the dark  
gloomy skies.
   The cold day with the dead keeps  
me from going out of my head
  Ever so beautiful is autumns gothic
gloom it keeps my heart warm as an  
old gothic tomb.

Edited by Twilightmystic on Nov. 21 2011,10:27 pm

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Scott C.

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Twilightmystic
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Posted: Nov. 24 2011,8:51 am

Quote (Twilightmystic @ Nov. 10 2011,6:33 am)
I  walk the city of the dead
sweet scents of dying jasmine
and upturned earth fragrants
the air lifting any of my dispairs
     Dark gloomy skies above I
here the cry of the mournin dove
ever a mournful cry brings tears
of joy to my eyes as well as the dark  
gloomy skies.
   The cold day with the dead keeps  
me from going out of my head
  Ever so beautiful is autumns gothic
gloom it keeps my heart warm as an  
old gothic tomb.

Greetings;Any input on this poem wether negative or positive or constructive ,from the forum is greatly welcomed.Scott AMORTE!!!

Edited by Twilightmystic on Nov. 24 2011,8:52 am

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Morgan
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Posted: Nov. 24 2011,9:16 am

All I can see is that this dark poetry slut thinks it's a nice read.  I like the imagery, and it describes what a lot of individuals on the forum would consider a paradise.

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Twilightmystic
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Posted: Nov. 25 2011,4:07 pm

greetings;Thanks,I am currently working on another one this is odd i have had know petic experience at all then one day out of nowere it came to me .Also taking your advice as well.more to come after ihave some beer.scott    AMORTE!!!

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