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Topic: ThE AUTUMN CEMETERY, the beauty of the necropolis and DEATH
Twilightmystic
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Posted: Nov. 05 2011,8:15 pm

THE  AUTUMN CEMETERY

                With in the autumn cemetery  I walk the roads of crypt rows.Ever reflecting on deaths domain wich inspires me and keeps me sane. .     Autumn leaves build up around thinking of once was buried in the ground. The bittersweet smell of autumns delight walking amoung the monuments evokes a beautiful sight.Within the autumn cemetery I walk the roads of crypt rows.Azrael ever a bestfriend in my heart nothing will ever tare our frindship apart.

Edited by Twilightmystic on Nov. 07 2011,7:20 pm

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Scott C.

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Posted: Nov. 06 2011,6:38 am

I think that piece speaks for a lot of us on this forum, but it's better to reformat into line by line so it looks like a poem on paper, as opposed to lookin' like prose, and double check syntax.  That work makes me want to drive to Lone Tree Cemetary, and not come home until I've seen it all.  Sweet.  :2bounce:

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Twilightmystic
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Posted: Nov. 06 2011,6:49 am

greetings:yeah just jotted it down,did not have time for reformatting i will be doing that next.scott  AMORTE!!

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Twilightmystic
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Posted: Nov. 06 2011,8:58 pm

The Autumn Cemetery  :         within  the autumn   cemetery i walk the roads of crypt rows.                                                                                               Ever reflecting on deaths domain wich inspires me     and keeps  me sane.Autumn Leave build up around thinking of what once was buried in the ground around .                                                                                            thinking of what once was buired in th ground.the bittersweesmel of autumns delightt.walking among the monuments evoe a beautiful sight.                                                                                                 Within the autumn cemetery i walked the road of crypt rows.Azrael ever a best friend in mi heart nothing will ever tare our friendship apart.

Edited by Twilightmystic on Nov. 06 2011,9:02 pm

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Scott C.

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Twilightmystic
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Posted: Nov. 07 2011,7:29 pm

greetings;I have an out dated browser so for some reason i go to put the poetery in proper format .Then it would not let me go from line to line. it only does paragraph form.Any hint on this site to change the size and format of  this poem?Thanks  ps ;next one comming soon AUTUMNS GOTHIC GlOOM.  AMORTE!!!

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